"I love the human angle of your idea — it feels very empathetic. You could make it even stronger by showing how users will actually use it day to day."

"The proposal is engaging and relatable, especially with your personal connection. It would be even stronger if you added examples of how affordability and scalability will be ensured across different types of schools."

"You’ve presented a highly original perspective on learning and biological information transfer. It could be improved by clarifying what “learning signature” means experimentally and suggesting how success might be measured or validated in a real…"