"EduAR is a creative way to bring abstract subjects to life; you could make it stronger by showing how it ensures inclusivity for students with different learning speeds or abilities."
"Strong and well-rounded solution! You could make it even more compelling by highlighting how the platform ensures privacy and data security, since sensitive medical information is involved."
"Great concept! It would be even stronger if you clarified what kind of skills or behaviors could realistically be transferred first, as a proof of concept."