"This concept fills a massive gap in the eSports ecosystem — there’s clearly a need for structured recruitment similar to what exists in traditional sports. It would be great to include metrics or early data showing how many amateur gamers are…"

"Campus RideSync is the kind of idea that could scale easily to multiple universities. It has both purpose and practicality behind it."

"The conclusion is inspiring, but it might be even stronger if you tied it back to the opening idea about how we ‘see’ the world"