"REAL TIME TRACKING [RTT] is innovative and well-detailed, but the description repeats terms like “revolutionary.” The text can be more concise, with clearer structure and stronger focus on data security. Depending solely on ads may raise privacy…"

"The concept addresses a real student problem, but how will it scale across different universities or student lifestyles? Adding a bit about distribution (on-campus kiosks, vending options, or delivery) could make the plan feel more complete."

"Privacy is a major concern with patient data — what measures would you take to ensure compliance and data security while still allowing useful predictions?"