"The structure of your write-up is strong. You clearly separated the problem, solution, and why it matters. That makes it very easy to follow and understand."

"One suggestion would be to include some statistics about how much sugar or salt people consume on average. That would give your argument more weight and credibility."

"Would love to see this implemented in our campus!!"

"Brilliant initiative! Making English learning affordable and practical will truly empower hardworking individuals to chase bigger opportunities with confidence"

"Your solution is innovative and practical, but its success hinges on user adoption and sustained engagement. Overcoming convenience-driven choices and ensuring reliable health ratings will be major challenges in achieving meaningful, long-term…"

"This is such a practical idea! Having healthier vending options on campus would really help students make better choices on busy days. I like how it combines convenience with wellness—definitely something that could have a big impact on student…"

"The logistics and digital payments features add strong practical value to wholesalers and retailers alike."

"Your startup idea addresses a real need and has strong potential if executed well—excited to see how you develop it further."

"Your solution feels realistic, not just like a theory. With technology today, it really could be developed and used widely, which is a big strength of your idea."

"Including schools, workplaces, and grocery stores in your plan makes the solution more powerful. It shows you’re thinking about community-level impact, not just individuals."

"Your explanation of the health problems caused by excess sugar and salt is very clear Vignesh!! I like how you linked it directly to diseases like diabetes and heart issues. It makes the problem feel serious and urgent"

"You did a good job explaining why current awareness campaigns are not enough. This helps show why your solution is needed and how it could fill the gap."

"Adding gamification like rewards and social sharing is a smart choice. It makes healthy eating more engaging, especially for kids and young adults who enjoy interactive apps."

"Overall, your write-up is very relatable because packaged foods are a part of all our lives. I think many people would connect with this and see the value of your solution."

"The idea of a barcode scanning app is very creative. It’s something people would actually use in grocery stores or at home. This makes your solution realistic and practical."