"I really like how you’ve identified a genuine pain point and tied the solution to on‑campus accessibility and affordability. To strengthen your value proposition, you might consider showing a rough cost structure or sample menu so users can better…"

"Very strong sustainability narrative here. Since this is tech-based, you might want to mention how cybersecurity and data protection will be handled to ensure safe transactions for users."

"Your explanation of market impact is strong and optimistic. Including a brief example of where AI-based screening is already in use (like Google’s real-world success) would make it more tangible."

"The Solar Energy Bank analogy really helps people visualize it, that’s powerful storytelling. A quick prototype demo or simulation of the app could make the concept even more tangible to investors or users."