"The text is informative but could be slightly condensed for better flow, especially in a pitch or summary format. Some points (like listing every feature separately) could be combined or simplified for a more polished and professional presentation,…"

"Although the casual tone makes the text friendly, expressions like “honestly feels unfair” or “drowning in textbooks” may seem too conversational for formal presentations, business plans, or academic submissions. Using a slightly more polished tone…"