"Great idea — it tackles real student needs and promotes sustainability. You could improve it by adding safety features (like ID verification or reviews) and filters for easier item searches."

"One suggestion — maybe think about how this could work in apartment settings or urban households with limited outdoor space. If BioSpark can be compact and odor-free, it’ll attract even more people living in cities."

"Business model – Right now, the pitch is health-focused, but investors will ask: How do you make money? Subscription for AI insights? Corporate wellness deals? Premium features? Worth adding."

"Great identification of the problem – You clearly showed why affordability and access are big issues for students. Maybe add a few real examples or survey results to strengthen it."

"BizShop is a simple and practical tool for small businesses and student sellers. I like how it removes the technical barrier of building a website. Adding templates and easy customization will make it even more appealing. Overall, it can help local…"