"You should totally add a visual diagram showing how GhostNet and Entropy Veil interact. Even a simple block diagram would help readers grasp how data flows through the system"

"Brilliantly blends wellness with academics. You might explore AI-based meal suggestions based on study duration, dietary preferences, or even time of day. Including eco-friendly packaging and transparent sourcing would resonate well with students…"

"The solution section is very clear and engaging. You could make it more persuasive by mentioning how accurate or reliable these AI models are compared to human ophthalmologists. That would add credibility to your argument."

"A forward-thinking solution that blends AI and user empowerment to fight SIMBOX fraud. To scale effectively, it must overcome challenges in data sharing, regulatory compliance, and cross-network integration."

"Great vision and practical execution plan! Awareness and education could play a huge role here, so maybe include how you plan to build trust and adoption within communities initially."

"The use of PLA or cellulose-based mesh is a smart choice. I wonder if you have explored other natural or recycled materials for the filter cartridge that could be even more cost-effective or have a smaller environmental footprint."