"The concept is very relevant and clearly written, but you could add a short problem statement with real data or statistics — for example, how much time or fuel is wasted searching for parking. This would make your introduction more impactful and…"

"You can make it better by mensioning Reference habit-building science or behavioral economics (e.g., “loss aversion” or “reward-based motivation”) to show depth and credibility."

"The implementation ideas are practical and clear, but you could add a brief problem statement at the start — for example, mentioning how much water is typically wasted in hostels or campuses daily. This gives stronger context to your solution."

"The idea is really practical and clearly explained, but you could add a short problem statement at the beginning to show what issue the project is solving. That will make the purpose clearer before explaining the solution."