"This is an innovative solution to a common issue in Indian cities. Smart drainage systems like this can make a huge difference in preventing flooding and improving urban living conditions."

"Impressive innovation! Integrating heat-absorbing materials and thermal energy recovery into road construction could have a major impact on urban energy efficiency."

"It would be good if users can choose who uses their data, like only for research or learning. That gives more trust. The verify system is nice, but sometimes people believe only what they agree with. Maybe think of a way to reduce that."

"The writing is very clear and easy to follow. One thing that could make it even stronger is a timeline or phase plan, like starting with one location, then expanding to more. That would make your idea sound more practical."

"This is a very nice idea! It’s simple but really meaningful. I just wonder how you’ll take care of privacy and data safety — since it’s for seniors, families would definitely want to know that it’s completely safe and secure."

"Great Farnaz! This is a heartfelt and powerful piece that really highlights how dangerous overhead wires can be, especially in rural areas. The personal story makes it very real and honestly more relatable, all the best pushing the idea forward!"

"A strong and insightful piece that effectively stresses the importance of indigenous cybersecurity development. However, it could benefit from a bit more data or examples, such as mentioning specific foreign products India relies on, or any existing…"