"This is a very timely and well-considered initiative! You've pointed out a significant and widening divide in the way that youth interact with significant domestic and international issues. Your suggested approach, which combines a gamified news app…"

"Your concept stands out for its originality and vision. I like how you combine imagination with purpose. Maybe explain what inspired this thought to make it more personal. It truly feels like something beyond the ordinary."

"“Beyond the World” feels creative and thought-provoking. The theme really draws attention. You could add a bit more context to help people understand your core idea better."

"This is a very timely and well-considered initiative! You've pointed out a significant and widening divide in the way that youth interact with significant domestic and international issues. Your suggested approach, which combines a gamified news app…"

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"An excellent model! Combining high visibility digital kiosks with a gamified app effectively uses infographics and quizzes to capture youth attention and make critical civic news accessible, engaging, and relevant."

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"I like the artistic direction, it really fits the theme. Maybe adding a real-world example or story would make it more relatable. Great foundation overall!"

"The presentation caught my eye! Maybe a short explanation of what inspired this project would deepen the impact. Very thoughtful work."

"The visuals are captivating and fit the idea well. You might want to balance creativity with clarity in your message. It’s already quite engaging."

"This is a well-thought-out problem statement with a clear solution. You’ve effectively highlighted the gap between traditional news sources and the needs of today’s youth. The idea of combining digital boards with a gamified app is creative and…"

"This solution addresses a real gap and could make news more accessible to students, but it might be tricky to actually keep students engaged with daily updates given their short attention spans and busy schedules. There’s also a risk that physical…"

"GreenLink is such a cool way for plant lovers to connect, swap tips, and trade plants locally. I love the community and sustainability vibe it brings. Keeping people engaged and making trading easy and safe will make it even better."

"I think this is brilliant idea to combat two very real issues in this day and age, reducing attention spans and misinformation of news. I like how it's customized to best accommodate the needs of the younger generations thus helping everyone…"

"I think this is a really practical and engaging idea—it makes staying informed easy and fun for students. I like how the combination of digital boards and a gamified app turns daily news into something interactive and accessible, helping youth stay…"