"This project has strong potential to support global smart city initiatives by reducing water wastage and improving distribution. Adding machine learning predictions could help anticipate demand and detect leaks before they occur."
"Your conclusion powerfully ties mathematics to societal benefits like reduced congestion and cleaner air.
It’s inspiring and gives a clear sense of purpose behind your project.
To strengthen it, you might mention potential future extensions or…"
"This is amazing! It directly tackles the one issue nobody really solves, consistency. That’s clever because it’s not about reinventing skincare formulas but it’s about changing the behavior behind skincare. One thing you could do to make it hit even…"
"The freemium model is great, but pricing can make or break student platforms — maybe mention how you’ll balance affordability with high-quality mentors."
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